some bars i wrote in school

if you tryna hate get lost like nemo,
and if you swaggerjackin you get tossed like freethrows
you'll never ever catch me rockin sniffs like kilos
jus dunks, blazers, jayz.. hell yeah i need those
my lungs ain't bigg, they wonder where all that weed go
i jus burn it all up, me n my amigos
flyer than seagulls, rollin like cee lo
gimme any beat i eat it up like a bistro
"got damn he cold", hell yeah we know...
futuristic swagger, my fits never be old

ima finish it sometime, i jus aint feel like it yet...

lemme know what y'all think

It's cool.....finish it and post the rest

post the last 6 bars...sounds like you were writing over the forever beat

you get the nemo line from Drake?

yeah i got that shit from drake sorta..

but i finished it last nite n recorded it n all that n freestyled a lil hook...

http://www.zshare.net/audio/6641056685b11455/

lemme know what yall think